Ecrin - well done for your excellent writing! I can see you have formed your letters correctly.
Maryam - well done for all of your hard work! I am really impressed! You have shown a good understanding of the text about tigers and I really like all the good deeds you have thought of.
Danyal - I can see you have been hard at work with your maths tasks and challenges today! How do you know that the car is longer than the aeroplane?
Your instructions were very clear and very detailed, well done!
Yousef - Well done for writing your instructions, I can see that you have used time adverbials and bossy verbs like 'chop' 'scoop' and 'give'. I especially liked your last instruction 'bon appetit' - very original! I like your picture of the monkeys eating all of the fruit too.